Hello ! :) ;)
Ah, you're in too. Great. Needs work, less haze for one. Good luck, Bastien!
Thank you Ulco. ;)
The next. :)
I think you should darken the textures and make more distinction between grass and rock. I would also add some lateral displacements (PF, billows or perlin, stretched by Y perhaps: 50/200/10, displaced lateral or normal by 20m or so) after a compute terrain and add some strata broken up by a PF (billows, sizes 50/200/10 or so) after that. Work on the coastline too, darken soft area just above water level by color adjust on a surface shader.
And put camera where I put the arrow for a more dramatic view, perhaps.
Just some ideas....
Already great terrain distribution and displacement. The adjustments suggested will really make this even better.
Nice start Bastien
A good beginning. Reminds me of large ship canals, Suez and Panama. Try some alternate viewpoints.
Looking good Bastien!
Now that's a different approach! Looks interesting! Like a canal indeed, dug out from the rocky terrain.
Thank you to all. :D
Cool, Bastien!
:)
Very nice Bastien
Hello, here one other canyon cliff
Nicely shaping up.
Merci, Thank you. ;)
other canyon. :)
Maybe dial back the lighting intensity a bit. Nice work -- my favorite so far, great overall shapes and camera angle.
Really good rock shapes and an excellent pov but very bright and hazy.
I thought 3.5 and 3.51 were right on track for realistic....
:D Thank you, bob.
And other canyon.
Those are very arty, especially the first one.
;)
Style 2 suits my eye nicely...carry on.
And other canyon. ;D
good stuff, I like 3.4 best myself but they's all crazy good!
Thank you, Bob. :)
With the lake. :)
Wild, love the colours, and the atmosphere.
Again other image. :D
You prefer what the image ?
The one before.
I like this one. You certainly have a distinct style, very consistent, and recognizable as a Bastien. No realism whatsoever, but good in an artistic way.
Yes, somehow stylish. There are quite some flipped displacements, but I like the look of the material.
Thank you :)
Here other picture.
This one second ?
Yes, I prefer the second one. Interesting what you can get out of TG.
Original and strange! :)
The second got potential for the Cliff challenge. Tweak, tweak, tweak... :D
Great artistic work! Like something from a dream :)
Thank you. There other picture. :)
Looks like a ship. Interesting.
This the effect twist and shear. ;D ;D
Cool idea, worth to be continued.
Good stuff! ;D
Upgrade to image.
Other canyon. :D Some changes where not need ?
Nice, definitely massive...well done.
Et, retravailler. :)
Finale? BRAV0!
Not again. ( Pas encore ) ;) But thank you.
Version finale. :) :D
Qu'est-ce que vous en dites ? :)
What do you say about it ? :)
Honest? It's a typical Bastien and very arty, but not very realistic, so...
Vous m'agacez. c'est jamais bien réel de toute manière de toute façon vous serez pas dans le top 3. >:( ::)
Quote from: bla bla 2 on April 05, 2018, 01:41:12 PM
Vous m'agacez. c'est jamais bien réel de toute manière de toute façon vous serez pas dans le top 3. >:( ::)
:o ???
Quote from: bla bla 2 on April 05, 2018, 01:41:12 PM
Vous m'agacez. c'est jamais bien réel de toute manière de toute façon vous serez pas dans le top 3. >:( ::)
Do you prefer lies or honest critisizm Bastien ?
I think that comment is out of order and in the cold light of day Bastien, you'll realise that. :(
This comment is indeed very inappropriate, Bastien.
I'll refrain from any C&C then, no problem.
Quote from: bla bla 2 on April 05, 2018, 01:41:12 PM
Vous m'agacez. c'est jamais bien réel de toute manière de toute façon vous serez pas dans le top 3. >:( ::)
Hello Bastien, I find your reaction curious. Dune does not criticize your image, but you recall a rule of the contest that the images will be judged by their photo-realism.
https://planetside.co.uk/forums/index.php/topic,24017.0.html
I am told: Wow, that's good. "Then I will not be told how to make the image realistic, so I do not really know how to do it with you ...
:-\
( Google translate )
On me dit : Ouah c'est bien. " " Après on m'aiderai pas à me dire comment rendre l'image réaliste, alors, je sais pas vraiment comment m'y prendre avec vous...
So the reason why you offended Ulco is that you think there is no one who helps you make your image realistic? ??? ??? ???
No one but you can make your image realistic. Do you think we all had a teacher to improve our skills? It's learning by doing for all of us.
You might have noticed, that if you have a specific question, you'll always get an answer from someone in the forum, but the question "how can I make my image realistic?" can't be answered. There is no "realistic render"-button.
Maybe you had a bad day, or whatever, but this is not the way we should communicate here.
Quote from: bla bla 2 on April 06, 2018, 08:40:01 AM
I am told: Wow, that's good. "Then I will not be told how to make the image realistic, so I do not really know how to do it with you ...
:-\
( Google translate )
On me dit : Ouah c'est bien. " " Après on m'aiderai pas à me dire comment rendre l'image réaliste, alors, je sais pas vraiment comment m'y prendre avec vous...
Hannes are faster ...
Hi Bastien,
Maybe nobody explains to you how to make the image more realistic but no member in this forum has this responsibility. Sometimes some have tips or advice sometimes no. Dune is the one who gives a lot of advice, but free to do it when and how he wants, he is not at our service.
To make realistic images there are his tutorials that I think excellent.
https://planetside.co.uk/forums/index.php/topic,17218.0.html
Pardon moi enthusiasam,,,,, :) :)
https://planetside.co.uk/forums/index.php/topic,24320.msg246532.html#msg246532
Certes...Je suis désolé Ulco, et vous autres, j'ai pas eu une bonne semaine, mais, j'essaie de faire bien réaliste mes images, qui
me tiens à coeur mais j'en suis désolé de m'être comporter comme ça. Pour moi, vous êtes tous mes ami(e)s.
Et, ça va être juste pour faire des images de rendus pour le concours, il reste une semaine.
Certainly ... I'm sorry Ulco, and you other, I did not have a good week, but, I'm trying to make my images real,
I'm keen on my heart but I'm sorry to behave like that. For me, you are all my friends.
And, it's going to be fair to make pictures for the contest, there's a week left.
Thanks Bastien, it's alright. You have a certain very specific style as an artist, but it's not realism, and it needn't be. That is not bad, certainly not! But realism is something completely different, and if you want to produce realistic renders, you'd have to follow some of the tutorials.
Hey Bastien
I hope you don't mind but there's something I have always wanted to ask you about your renders.
You always have a really (REALLY) wide angle on your camera, much more than one would use usually as a photographer.
I wonder if this is your intent (it's a great stylistic element/use if so).
Are you working on a laptop? If so it's VERY hard to place cameras easily.
Are you using the magnifying glass in the navigation window to move in and out of your scene?
If so then do you know that this dose NOT move the camera but changes its zoom factor instead.
Please don't take this as a negative critique but trying to understand where your unique style comes from.
Cheers
Quote from: cyphyr on April 06, 2018, 01:35:10 PM
If so then do you know that this dose NOT move the camera but changes its zoom factor instead.
Cheers
hmmm....this is interesting...