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Bastien Challenge
« on: January 13, 2018, 07:20:20 PM »
Hello ! :)   ;)

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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #1 on: January 14, 2018, 06:11:50 AM »
Ah, you're in too. Great. Needs work, less haze for one. Good luck, Bastien!
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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #2 on: January 14, 2018, 09:18:15 AM »
Thank you Ulco.  ;)

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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #3 on: January 14, 2018, 11:08:57 AM »
The next. :)

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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #4 on: January 14, 2018, 12:52:04 PM »
I think you should darken the textures and make more distinction between grass and rock. I would also add some lateral displacements (PF, billows or perlin, stretched by Y perhaps: 50/200/10, displaced lateral or normal by 20m or so) after a compute terrain and add some strata broken up by a PF (billows, sizes 50/200/10 or so) after that. Work on the coastline too, darken soft area just above water level by color adjust on a surface shader.
And put camera where I put the arrow for a more dramatic view, perhaps.

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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #5 on: January 14, 2018, 01:25:06 PM »
Already great terrain distribution and displacement. The adjustments suggested will really make this even better.

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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #6 on: January 14, 2018, 02:15:16 PM »
Nice start Bastien

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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #7 on: January 14, 2018, 03:20:43 PM »
A good beginning. Reminds me of large ship canals, Suez and Panama. Try some alternate viewpoints.
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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #8 on: January 15, 2018, 09:48:43 AM »
Looking good Bastien!


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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #9 on: January 20, 2018, 10:28:48 AM »
Now that's a different approach! Looks interesting! Like a canal indeed, dug out from the rocky terrain.
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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #10 on: January 21, 2018, 08:42:51 AM »
Thank you to all.  :D


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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #11 on: January 21, 2018, 09:21:12 AM »
Cool, Bastien!

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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #12 on: January 21, 2018, 02:40:29 PM »
 :)

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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #13 on: January 21, 2018, 03:05:41 PM »
Very nice Bastien

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Re: Bastien Challenge
« Reply #14 on: January 30, 2018, 09:55:07 AM »
Hello, here one other canyon cliff

 

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