Author Topic: Valley  (Read 833 times)

Offline sboerner

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Re: Valley
« Reply #15 on: November 27, 2017, 02:29:24 PM »
Very nice. Just on the edge of surreal very believable. Great clouds and waterfall.

Offline Danny

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Re: Valley
« Reply #16 on: November 29, 2017, 04:43:15 PM »
I like the waterfall, light on the surface is a bit harsh though

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Re: Valley
« Reply #17 on: November 30, 2017, 01:22:49 PM »
Really nice, quite epic. Clouds are stunning.

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Re: Valley
« Reply #18 on: December 01, 2017, 03:37:59 PM »
That's the problem - haze is set to zero. I really can't think of how to reduce it anymore! It's a problem I come up against many times.

Perhaps increasing the contrast in TG would cut through the haze

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Re: Valley
« Reply #19 on: December 02, 2017, 03:55:19 PM »
Ah! GI seems to be the culprit.

Yeah, as I've progressed I found that one too, but it didn't strike me off the top as an area to fix. Good call.
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Re: Valley
« Reply #20 on: December 02, 2017, 04:11:05 PM »
Interesting recent post, depending on render time for your project, maybe a tweak or two with a crop?
http://www.planetside.co.uk/forums/index.php/topic,23529.msg238151.html#msg238151

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Re: Valley
« Reply #21 on: December 05, 2017, 08:59:36 AM »
Another version - just after the golden 1/2 hour! Distant rocks with more masking and a fore ground rock.

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Re: Valley
« Reply #22 on: December 05, 2017, 09:06:18 AM »
I like this one much more. It has greater detail and interest, a combination of scales leading the viewer in. Excellent river by the way. Something missing, can't put my finger on it. Keep working on this one :)
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Re: Valley
« Reply #23 on: December 05, 2017, 09:45:56 AM »
Thanks, I think I'll have to add the goats back in.

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Re: Valley
« Reply #24 on: December 05, 2017, 01:05:04 PM »
Great light, very much better indeed. But forget about the goats, the river now looks like 5-8m wide, with goats the proportion problem might get back. Unless they're small enough.
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Re: Valley
« Reply #25 on: December 05, 2017, 03:49:37 PM »
I like where you've taken this man.
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Re: Valley
« Reply #26 on: December 05, 2017, 05:08:56 PM »
Thanks, new update on the way soon...

Offline D.A. Bentley

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Re: Valley
« Reply #27 on: December 05, 2017, 10:36:20 PM »
I really really love it!  The only thing I would say, is because it looks so good, I want to see more of the river at the bottom edge.  Can you pull down the blind a little more to reveal more of where the river is going?  ;)

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Re: Valley
« Reply #28 on: December 06, 2017, 08:45:38 PM »
Final! time for me to move on.

Offline Lady of the Lake

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Re: Valley
« Reply #29 on: December 06, 2017, 09:16:15 PM »
Perfect. :)

 

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