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Offline Renegade26

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Alpine Lake
« on: October 10, 2017, 06:20:57 PM »
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Offline Oshyan

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Re: Alpine Lake
« Reply #1 on: October 10, 2017, 07:19:33 PM »
Very lush, I like it. I only think that there would be some bare rock/ground near the water around these rocks/islands and/or some different/altered vegetation. Also some general color variation would be helpful for realism I think.

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Re: Alpine Lake
« Reply #2 on: October 11, 2017, 07:42:54 AM »
And perhaps some size reference; it's hard to see how big the 'islands' are.
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Re: Alpine Lake
« Reply #3 on: October 14, 2017, 03:12:41 AM »
I echo Dune's comment, and I am not a big fan of the water but am lousy at water lately so offer no advice there.
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Re: Alpine Lake
« Reply #4 on: October 14, 2017, 04:04:53 PM »
Very nice indeed. To me the water is way too rough (and I think the wave size is too big as well) and too murky. I'd expect a very clear water here.
Anyway very promising.

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Re: Alpine Lake
« Reply #5 on: October 14, 2017, 06:03:38 PM »
Very nice indeed. To me the water is way too rough (and I think the wave size is too big as well) and too murky. I'd expect a very clear water here.
Anyway very promising.

the murky and too wavy stuff is what seems off to me as well.....thanks for nailing that down...heh heh.
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