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Offline leafada

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Canyon
« on: September 09, 2017, 08:24:21 AM »
 :D hello,im leaf,this is my first work of canyon series. which ver do you like?

Offline archonforest

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Re: Canyon
« Reply #1 on: September 09, 2017, 09:21:40 AM »
Great start.  Very promising.  Can't decide which one is better  :)
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Re: Canyon
« Reply #2 on: September 09, 2017, 04:14:16 PM »
Welcome to the forum, Leaf. For a first post this is really promising. I like version 2 the most; the water murkiness suits the dusty environment. What you could do is darken the sand a bit where it's wet, maybe 10cm above water level, gradually fading out (fuzzy zone), and perhaps add a reflective shader (no RT) in that region too.
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Offline Hannes

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Re: Canyon
« Reply #3 on: September 09, 2017, 04:15:38 PM »
What Ulco said. Welcome, and great images. I prefer the second one as well.

Offline bobbystahr

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Re: Canyon
« Reply #4 on: September 09, 2017, 05:27:48 PM »
Ditto what Dune said and Welcome to your new home heh heh heh. Keep on Tweaking.
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Offline KyL

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Re: Canyon
« Reply #5 on: September 09, 2017, 05:54:29 PM »
Both are very nice!

Welcome :)

Offline leafada

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Re: Canyon
« Reply #6 on: September 10, 2017, 09:09:13 AM »
 ;D thx for everyone and
@Ulco, thank you for your advise, i would consider them seriously,cheers ;)

 

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