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Offline Cocateho

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Autumn afternoon
« on: May 03, 2017, 12:35:18 AM »
A first pass on this one, definitely feels like it could be tweaked a bit and things added but I'm pretty happy with the basic layout so far.

Offline luvsmuzik

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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #1 on: May 03, 2017, 01:22:44 AM »
Pretty pretty! You do not post near enough. Very nice!

Offline Hannes

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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #2 on: May 03, 2017, 05:06:20 AM »
Beautiful!! And very realistic. Maybe a little bit too sharp for my taste.

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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #3 on: May 03, 2017, 05:41:51 AM »
That's really beautiful!

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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #4 on: May 03, 2017, 07:00:11 AM »
Beautiful!! And very realistic. Maybe a little bit too sharp for my taste.

Yes a really slight DoF would make it perfect! The foreground is a bit too sharp.

But anyway very beautiful!
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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #5 on: May 03, 2017, 07:03:54 AM »
Echo others. Beautiful!

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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #6 on: May 03, 2017, 01:19:43 PM »
Maybe flowers or stones poking thru the grass but lovely so far, maybe a bit sharp as hannes said but some DoF would soften that.
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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #7 on: May 03, 2017, 01:46:55 PM »
Wonderful :)
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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #8 on: May 03, 2017, 03:26:02 PM »
beautifull,ilike it

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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #9 on: May 03, 2017, 08:01:32 PM »
Stunning!! Great colors.  8)
Yeah a little dof would be great at the front.
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Offline Cocateho

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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #10 on: May 05, 2017, 01:19:10 PM »
Little update, tried to make the foreground not feel so empty, added a little dof but it's kind of hard to tell.

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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #11 on: May 05, 2017, 03:08:39 PM »
There's a lot to like about this. I Especially like the fall colors that are naturally/randomly  smatterings of green, yellow, red.
I think the foreground would benefit by adding something that breaks up the 'sameness' across the bottom third of the image. 
But all things considered it's a really nice render.


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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #12 on: May 05, 2017, 03:11:51 PM »
Little update, tried to make the foreground not feel so empty, added a little dof but it's kind of hard to tell.

Great update! Dof is kinda invisible though...
...many rooms to explore but the doors look the same...

Offline Cocateho

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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #13 on: May 05, 2017, 04:27:07 PM »
This is a color corrected version, slightly warmer. I've noticed a big difference in how warm my monitor is compared to my phone screen, so I'm interested if this looks better or not to you guys than the original.

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Re: Autumn afternoon
« Reply #14 on: May 05, 2017, 04:32:20 PM »
Very nice!
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