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folders iceland entry wip
« on: February 06, 2015, 05:44:09 AM »
another view of iceland c&c appreciated

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Re: folders iceland entry wip
« Reply #1 on: February 06, 2015, 06:31:00 AM »
Because of the northernmost position of the island, I think the image might be much darker. Otherwise, I think ou have a good start here.

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Re: folders iceland entry wip
« Reply #2 on: February 06, 2015, 08:16:14 AM »
This works. I would say break up the canyon walls with various PFs. A little to smooth at the start. And slow down the water just a bit. IF its possible to make it slightly smaller scale over all, that may be good too. But I guess it depends on what your inspiration is.
The canyons in Iceland that I have seen photos of are quite awesome. Want to go fishing there real bad ;D
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Re: folders iceland entry wip
« Reply #3 on: February 06, 2015, 07:33:14 PM »
another view -
Badger - agree the walls need work- same problem in this view unsure what you meant by slowing down the water

thanks for the comments

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Re: folders iceland entry wip
« Reply #4 on: February 06, 2015, 07:45:53 PM »
Think he means to reduce water roughness and wave size.

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Re: folders iceland entry wip
« Reply #5 on: February 07, 2015, 07:06:40 AM »
I would work on the water first, that looks quite alright for a rough river or sea inlet. Maybe disperse the foamy whites by a voronoi PF abit more. Main work should be on the land!
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