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Offline Zairyn Arsyn

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Zlain's Iceland Render v9
« on: January 10, 2015, 05:21:15 AM »
My Iceland entry
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a meadow like scene

Comments & suggestions welcome.
« Last Edit: February 13, 2015, 05:27:30 PM by Zlain three nine »
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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #1 on: January 10, 2015, 06:26:20 AM »
It's a nice meadow, and the moist air is great, but I suggest making it more typical of Iceland, so add at least something that makes you think of Iceland right away (lava area, caldera in distance, black piece of beach, steaming pool....).
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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #2 on: January 10, 2015, 10:20:25 AM »
... A viking boy and girl on a nice picnic  ;D Great start man. I liked your road from last time a lot, looking forward to seeing you work through this one too.
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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #3 on: January 10, 2015, 11:34:06 AM »
great start indeed,
I echo Ulco and Michael... love the heavy mist/low cloud!
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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #4 on: January 10, 2015, 01:30:47 PM »
Very nice base Lane ! Be watching this one for sure

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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #5 on: January 10, 2015, 03:57:43 PM »

Looks good Lane.

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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #6 on: January 10, 2015, 05:30:41 PM »
You've captured the feel and look to Iceland's environment very well; now to create a point of interest as suggested.

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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #7 on: January 10, 2015, 08:02:24 PM »
new test render

I didnt like the way the grass looked on the slopes so i changed them with a distribution shader.

ive made the background a little more visible, cause I plan to add another cloud layer (storm cloud), might change the sun position too.

ill also add a rock into  the meadow.
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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #8 on: January 11, 2015, 06:17:40 AM »
The latest draft is definitely zeroing in it more, I think. How tall are those mountains though? Also take care your lighting doesn't get too flat with the mist in the sky. It's a nice element, that fog, but it could mess up your lighting is all. I see there are some small breaks in it, so perhaps that will be enough, or you can increase the break-up if needed. I would avoid use of multiple light sources to compensate, if possible.

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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #9 on: January 11, 2015, 06:56:34 AM »
I liked the first clouds better.
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Zlain's Iceland Render v3
« Reply #10 on: January 12, 2015, 04:41:55 PM »
New iteration
rendertime - 4:42:26s

i like this one more personally.

objects used

NWDA grass3 - v7, v5, v4, v3
Silva 3D rapeseed flowers v1, v3

(terrain is a heightfield crafted in GeoControl2)
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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #11 on: January 12, 2015, 04:43:34 PM »
Huge improvement on the sky. Some more diversity in rocks and grass... getting perfect!
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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #12 on: January 12, 2015, 06:33:28 PM »
I agree with Dune, looking very nice, and the sky and background improvement is notable. You have a pretty good range of contrast now, but the foreground still seems a bit flat to me. This kind of lighting is normal on an overcast day of course, so maybe it's just how it's got to be, but I'm curious to see if it can be tweaked just a bit.

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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #13 on: January 12, 2015, 08:25:27 PM »
The point of interest now is the foreground field with a typical Iceland atmosphere. I think you still need a point of interest, perhaps in the foreground. Suggest you maybe review many of the images given here by Oshyan; and, many others you could Google. Maybe some horses grazing in the foreground; mountain goats or other.

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Re: Zlain's Iceland Render
« Reply #14 on: January 14, 2015, 02:56:42 AM »
added a rock/boulder, just a small change.
still working on it.

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