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Offline mhaze

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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #15 on: January 16, 2015, 08:20:12 AM »
Much better pov, this has real potential.  I suspect the colours are temporary as they are too bright.  The tundra presets that come with tg3 are perfect.

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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #16 on: January 16, 2015, 08:11:20 PM »
Changed camera location, terrain and sun angle.

And yes, surfacing is far from complete.

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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #17 on: January 17, 2015, 04:35:05 AM »
Lower than that first revision, I agree (and the lighting was flat, but of course temporary). But I actually liked the first update to the PoV more than this latest one. Seeing that one a bit closer to the ground might be it for me, then just improvements to texture, displacement, lighting, etc.

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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #18 on: January 17, 2015, 07:03:39 AM »
Agree with Oshyan.
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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #19 on: January 21, 2015, 05:56:43 PM »
Ok, I reverted the terrain, lowered camera yet again.

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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #20 on: January 21, 2015, 06:37:36 PM »
Quite promising. Now just need better light, perhaps some foreground interest (object, church, house perhaps, or a famous Icelandic Horse! :D ), etc. :)

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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #21 on: January 21, 2015, 09:13:33 PM »
I like this it has promise just needs some veg and a focus/point of interest.

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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #22 on: January 22, 2015, 09:23:24 PM »
Another update. I'll have to think of something for the foreground...

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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #23 on: January 22, 2015, 09:47:33 PM »
Like this a lot better too. Stating to really look interesting.
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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #24 on: February 12, 2015, 11:27:40 PM »
Likely the last WIP before the deadline. Still got some tweaks to work out. If there is anything major that needs attention, I'd be grateful for a mention. Thanks!

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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #25 on: February 12, 2015, 11:57:27 PM »
I believe all looks very good; but, the white of the snow capped mountains and the white of the clouds are competing ...a matter of taste maybe. The snow against a blue sky would be a better contrast.

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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #26 on: February 13, 2015, 06:58:47 AM »
Agreed, and maybe some more diversity in rock colors.
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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #27 on: February 14, 2015, 02:04:07 PM »
Good luck, this is looking really promising, some extra details will make this!
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Re: Otakar's Iceland
« Reply #28 on: February 15, 2015, 02:01:53 AM »
Thanks all, entry has been submitted.

 

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