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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #75 on: December 30, 2014, 08:04:29 AM »
It's looking really good, Richard, but there's one or two things I would do to it. Hesitate to mention them, but I still do. See what you do with it, it's a great entry anyway.
1. Reduce the huge stones at the coast; they actually quite large (5-10m?), which isn't too realistic. You should (or better said; I would) try stones of max 1meter and a narrower line. And perhaps a very few bigger ones.
2. Take the warp out of the foam fractal, and stretch the fractal a bit (1.5 or so)  in the travelling direction.
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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #76 on: December 31, 2014, 03:17:40 AM »
Once more into the breach................. ::)

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #77 on: December 31, 2014, 06:42:43 AM »
Try a painted mask for your wake. You can locate it by adding a transform shader, and taking the ship's location and angle.

The rocks are so much better now!
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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #78 on: January 01, 2015, 03:16:12 AM »
Worked on the rocks some more...........also the wake. Pretty happy with the pic. For all intents and purposes this is finished. I still got a month to tinker............ ;D


My new rig will be here next week................gotta render it one more time just for the hell of it.  :-*

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #79 on: January 01, 2015, 03:54:10 AM »
Looking very good. And, congrats on the new rig.

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #80 on: January 01, 2015, 07:39:03 AM »
This looks very good.
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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #81 on: January 06, 2015, 04:10:06 PM »
Beautiful! Looks very Lord-Of-The-Ringish!

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #82 on: January 06, 2015, 05:10:39 PM »
wonderful consistent render from one side to the other. Very deep and rich color and value!
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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #83 on: January 06, 2015, 06:17:25 PM »
A really epic scene, they look like they are on a mission!
massive sense of scale...
keep on!
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Jason