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Offline archonforest

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #15 on: November 29, 2014, 05:44:30 PM »
Wow very nice one! ;)
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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #16 on: November 29, 2014, 05:55:58 PM »
Does the left hand mountain look out of place compared to the others?  The others are mostly horizontal and it is vertical in strata.  Liking the shoreline and lighting a lot.

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #17 on: November 29, 2014, 05:59:08 PM »
Still got work to do on the displacements..........good eye though.  :P


When you gonna update your post...............it was really good, Pea.

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #18 on: November 29, 2014, 08:33:09 PM »
Wow that is way more dramatic than from what it was at the start! Great set up. Just needs tweaking now.
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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #19 on: November 30, 2014, 04:43:43 AM »
Gonna take a break.............getting a headache.  :'(


I already thought of a title..............gonna keep it to myself until I'm "finished" with this.

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #20 on: November 30, 2014, 05:15:31 AM »
Richard, you have a good one going here.

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #21 on: November 30, 2014, 07:30:43 AM »
You're doing well. The strata was a bit too much indeed, you could restrict that too minimum slope or higher altitudes, and PF, for some strata here and there, but not near the coast. The black rocks need algae and a wet line!
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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #22 on: November 30, 2014, 07:42:33 PM »
One more time................ :)

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #23 on: November 30, 2014, 10:21:37 PM »
Happier with the steam............now if someone could tell me why there is a "ring of fire" on the sail I would appreciate it.  :o

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #24 on: December 01, 2014, 06:57:24 AM »
It probably has to do with the vertices on the sail model. What if you up translucency? Or uncheck premultiply color?

You should warp the vertical cloud (by a warp shader in x and Z direction). My opinion, at least.
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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #25 on: December 01, 2014, 08:48:56 PM »
Twerking.............sorry tweaking.  :P


Probably the last update for awhile............gonna be deep inside Poser. I have a few Vikings to make.  :-\

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #26 on: December 01, 2014, 10:51:36 PM »
Lighting here is super... Looking forward to see what your twerking tweaking produces!
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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #27 on: December 02, 2014, 07:58:48 AM »
So what did you do to remove the sail artifacts?
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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #28 on: December 02, 2014, 04:33:22 PM »
Actually I didn't do anything................I think it was a sign from the gods.  ::)

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #29 on: December 02, 2014, 10:28:09 PM »
I really really like the blacks on the right. That is really rich and dramatic. I also like a lot the transition from darks to lights across the whole image.

My only thing about this scene now is it feels like it is missing lots of little details. little stones and color variations and such. Perhaps some fine erosion as well. A braided stream through the valley and emptying into the lake may be effective here too.
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