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Offline Danny

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Re: Iceland - Bastien.
« Reply #30 on: January 30, 2015, 11:07:29 AM »
I like the updated srf variation.. alot. Just a few suggestions if I may; some additional displacements (PF & or redirect) as well as more color variation on your rock base. The stock grey is a but flat compared to the rest of the image. Also bit of contrast in the effects tab will go a long way in an image like this and last but not least some higher render settings, AA and GI srf details. These are pretty simple ways to get this image popping. Looks promising. Good luck my friend ^^

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Re: Iceland - Bastien.
« Reply #31 on: January 30, 2015, 12:25:23 PM »
This last one is the best!
I like this one, I agree with Danny about the surfaces and displacement, also some lighting angle change, maybe lower the sun and create some more shadow to increase the drama?
My French is bad... Google translate is fun sometimes
Merci Bastien,
Bon chance!
Jason
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Re: Iceland - Bastien.
« Reply #32 on: January 31, 2015, 03:43:36 PM »
Comme ça ?

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Re: Iceland - Bastien.
« Reply #33 on: February 01, 2015, 09:28:39 AM »
Excellent, coming along nicely.

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Re: Iceland - Bastien.
« Reply #34 on: February 11, 2015, 12:01:14 PM »
Je sais pas, si c'est mieux. Mais, je montre quand même. :)

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Re: Iceland - Bastien.
« Reply #35 on: February 11, 2015, 03:28:42 PM »
Retouché sur photoshop, mais je pense pas qu'on à le droit.

Retouched on photoshop, but I think no one in the right.  ::)

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Re: Iceland - Bastien.
« Reply #36 on: February 13, 2015, 10:52:44 AM »
The added PW has helped out a lot in this, that said the black scattered cloud is a bit distracting. I would suggest lightening that up a bit as well as revisiting the far tree population as it doesn't look natural IMHO. 1 more suggestion if I may is work the shoreline around the lake. Good luck my friend 

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Re: Iceland - Bastien.
« Reply #37 on: February 14, 2015, 02:02:53 PM »
Good luck with the final Bastien, you have worked hard and progressed far.... The end is close!
Salut
Jason

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Re: Iceland - Bastien.
« Reply #38 on: February 15, 2015, 08:14:19 PM »
Realiste 11 Finale.

Realiste 11.2/ retoucher par photoshop.