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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
« Reply #30 on: April 05, 2013, 05:34:51 AM »
I think this looks really nice. You might consider a little more glare still, but it's a huge improvement already. Road is also great now.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
« Reply #31 on: April 05, 2013, 08:09:55 AM »
Very nice.

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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
« Reply #32 on: April 06, 2013, 04:07:21 AM »
i decided to add a pop of bushes, from Mr. Lampposts bush pack

changed the clouds some - in the last one they were overlapping the sun, though it didnt make much of a difference, i changed it anyways, theirs a bit of a difference.



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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
« Reply #33 on: April 06, 2013, 04:41:06 AM »
Nice - I like the soft, almost gentle lighting

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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
« Reply #34 on: April 06, 2013, 04:43:20 AM »
i should have another large good quality render by sometime tomorrow,
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
« Reply #35 on: April 06, 2013, 04:44:31 PM »
a larger version :)
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
« Reply #36 on: April 06, 2013, 05:05:36 PM »
I like the mood the gentle and soft light gives to this image.

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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
« Reply #37 on: April 06, 2013, 08:23:18 PM »
i'm thinking about changing the flower objects, to the dogwrose bush w/ flowers (i got some feedback elsewhere)
what do you guys think?

i'll do a render and post it.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
« Reply #38 on: April 07, 2013, 02:50:31 AM »
different flowers...
nwda dogrose tgos

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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
« Reply #39 on: April 07, 2013, 04:22:14 AM »
I think the flower blossoms are too close to the same color as your dry grass. Maybe turn the diffuse color up some. I like these flowers better than the previous ones. They just need to stand out more.

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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
« Reply #40 on: April 07, 2013, 06:43:53 AM »
Nice flowers, but I agree with Yossam. If they would be deeper/lighter blue it would give a great contrast to the warm glow of the rest. I think you need to reduce the pinpricks of shine (either size or brightness) on the ground pebbles. It all looks kind of dry and they attract just a little too much attention.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
« Reply #41 on: April 07, 2013, 05:08:23 PM »
the light and mood here is perfect, the detailing too, a great image so far!
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
« Reply #42 on: April 07, 2013, 07:01:24 PM »
currently the flowers are now a deeper color of red, from what they were before, but i could change the diffuse texture next time i render.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
« Reply #43 on: April 07, 2013, 07:09:21 PM »
new flower color, will post another version with a different color soon
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
« Reply #44 on: April 07, 2013, 09:28:18 PM »
blue flowers

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