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Offline swissAdA

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swissAdA's WIP's
« on: March 14, 2013, 08:21:50 AM »
2 WIP's
i'm working on
P.S. My text is always translated with Google  http://swissada.deviantart.com/

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Re: swissAdA's WIP's
« Reply #1 on: March 14, 2013, 08:31:24 AM »
Wow, both are looking very nice already. The atmosphere, perspective, general sense of scale, and composition of the 1st one I like a lot. The rays in the 2nd are phenomenal, too.

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Re: swissAdA's WIP's
« Reply #2 on: March 14, 2013, 09:56:37 AM »
Holy cow, that looks great! Maybe the road in the second image is a bit too glossy. It looks kind of wet. If it just has rained you maybe could make the reflections a bit more irregular?
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Offline FrankB

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Re: swissAdA's WIP's
« Reply #3 on: March 14, 2013, 10:01:23 AM »
They're both great! Will you continue to develop both, or decide for one?

A little hint on the first one: the trees and the house don't seem to be in synch, scale-wise. Particularly the tree in the middle must have towel-sized leafs!

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Offline Jo Kariboo

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Re: swissAdA's WIP's
« Reply #4 on: March 14, 2013, 02:27:59 PM »
Nice and calm effect with this light !!!

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Re: swissAdA's WIP's
« Reply #5 on: March 14, 2013, 07:41:39 PM »
very fun!
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Re: swissAdA's WIP's
« Reply #6 on: March 16, 2013, 10:47:10 AM »
Great WIP's! Would be hard to choose if you'd pursue both. I agree with the made comments, and may add that I would be careful with any trees in the open terrain with the house. maybe some patches of small shrub would do. And I would loose the one large rock. And also make the atmo a bit less 'dense', which would give it more brightness, I guess.
In the 'wet' road, I would add some 'artifacts' to the verges; it is very clean. Some dirt, soil, emptied ashtray... And indeed add a little wear/patchiness to the road surface.
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Re: swissAdA's WIP's
« Reply #7 on: March 27, 2013, 08:06:21 PM »
two stunners  for sure, but which one to choose?
:)