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Offline zaxxon

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Re: Darth's Road Entry - Update
« Reply #45 on: April 03, 2013, 04:29:25 PM »
Wonderful light.

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Re: Darth's Road Entry - Update
« Reply #46 on: April 04, 2013, 08:41:20 AM »
Nice light, indeed. But may I be a pain and comment? I would smooth the road more, get rid of the tyre marks (they go strange ways), and most of all, use a different bark texture for the birches or get the repetition out of it. Make it procedural instead, not hard at all.
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Re: Darth's Road Entry - Update
« Reply #47 on: April 04, 2013, 04:27:41 PM »
Agree with Dune, except about smoothing the road. Looks like back roads through the woods where I live, to me. Looks real this way.
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Re: Darth's Road Entry - Update
« Reply #48 on: April 04, 2013, 05:53:37 PM »
Very nice! I'd prefer the road a bit smoother as well, it looks to be really in bad shape as is, but I guess that depends on the look you're going for.

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Re: Darth's Road Entry - Update
« Reply #49 on: April 04, 2013, 06:31:03 PM »
Thank you for the suggestions. I've been meaning to work on the road surface more, but I wanted to get the lighting to look satisfactory first.

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Re: Darth's Road Entry - Update
« Reply #50 on: April 10, 2013, 08:21:29 PM »
this looks truly stunning!... Any further tweaks you do here, will only edge this closer to perfection!
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Offline Gannaingh

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Re: Darth's Road Entry - Final
« Reply #51 on: April 13, 2013, 03:05:38 PM »
Here is the final version for now. I was originally rendering it at 1920x1080, but i forgot to enable some of the ground cover, which made it look rather naked, so I had to make a smaller version to submit it on time. It's not perfect, but I won't go around poking holes in my efforts to win ;)

I've rather enjoyed creating this one, thank you for all of you suggestions and kind words along the way.


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Re: Darth's Road Entry - Final
« Reply #52 on: April 13, 2013, 04:00:18 PM »
Very nice!

Offline zaxxon

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Re: Darth's Road Entry - Final
« Reply #53 on: April 13, 2013, 04:05:34 PM »
The lighting on the foliage, the misty rays of light, the rough road surface, lot's of 'Wows!' in this image. Truly well envisioned and and brought to life.

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Re: Darth's Road Entry - Final
« Reply #54 on: April 27, 2013, 05:11:25 PM »
Damn thats good

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Re: Darth's Road Entry - Final
« Reply #55 on: February 07, 2015, 07:00:01 AM »
Looking great indeed, but if I were to keep improving, I would make the foliage a darker, less saturated and more towards blue green.

 

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