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Offline Jo Kariboo

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Jo Kariboo WIP road
« on: March 02, 2013, 04:00:07 PM »
I began this image with "desert road" of dandel'O. I try recreate the light at the beginning of the day on spring season.
vegetations: dune and x-frog
sasha: I download the human figure at this link. Where are the file?  Actually I don't retrace it
http://www.artec3d.com/fr/gallery/3d-models/,

I have any idea if I am illigible by using the file of someone else, but as I said previously I don't know how create a realist road!

Offline Jo Kariboo

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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #1 on: March 03, 2013, 02:45:41 AM »
A other one and for the following ones I go tried some thing of very different ! Just for fun !!!   :P

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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #2 on: March 03, 2013, 03:02:05 AM »
I think you've got a very good start! I like the soft lighting in the distance and the road retreating into the mist. There's an odd black shape on the road in the foreground, is that a "worn" road, or a tree shadow, or what? Other than that, I think you're heading in the right direction. The shadowy figure in the distance is very cool. :D

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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #3 on: March 03, 2013, 03:28:46 AM »
Thank you Oshyan for your comment. For the black shape, sincerly I don't know, but it's not a shadow. I try to remove it.   :)

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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #4 on: March 05, 2013, 02:17:27 PM »
a other WIP !

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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #5 on: March 05, 2013, 02:46:23 PM »
Nice one Jo :) I like the sense of scale here as well as the clouds and lighting.
Two things for improvement come to my mind, if I may, first the road looks a bit unused perhaps and secondly the stones could  use some work.

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« Reply #6 on: March 05, 2013, 03:18:04 PM »
Thank you T-U for your comments and your direction for the observation!  :)

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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #7 on: March 05, 2013, 05:02:59 PM »
Agree with Martin. Maybe also give the larger stones some patchy occurrence, or piles, not as spread as this. But I really like the bluish misty background. How did you get the blue into there? Increase blue sky density or change the color of the haze?
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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #8 on: March 05, 2013, 05:15:25 PM »
Thank you Dune for your suggestion. I reduce actually the quantity of fakestone. The haze is grey but I increase the blue sky density at 3.5 .

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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #9 on: March 05, 2013, 08:53:41 PM »
Nice setup. I like the view in the distance.

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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #10 on: March 05, 2013, 09:52:37 PM »
A very nice landscape, the color pallette is especially pleasing.

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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #11 on: March 05, 2013, 10:19:35 PM »
Great image and I agree about the cool colour palate.
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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #12 on: March 06, 2013, 06:10:04 AM »
Really like this leap forward!

Agree the gravel path should be broken up a bit. But great looking render already!
It has been eaten.

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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #13 on: March 08, 2013, 06:45:20 PM »
Old abandoned country road. I change the POV and the road etc.
Thank for comments and critics.

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Re: Jo Kariboo WIP road
« Reply #14 on: March 08, 2013, 08:40:25 PM »
I forgot

vegetations: Ulco, Dandel'O, Mr.Lampost, Aymenk 2003
ruins: Ogre
house: TurboSquid
cyclist: Terrade

 

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